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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates a line chart showing the number of parcels delivered by FedEx and TNT Mail Services over the years 1920 to 2000; in 1920, FedEx delivered 5000 parcels while TNT delivered 3000 parcels, in 1930, FedEx delivered 10000 and TNT delivered 6000, in 1940, FedEx delivered 25000 and TNT delivered 12000, in 1950, FedEx delivered 15000 and TNT delivered 10000, in 1960, both FedEx and TNT delivered approximately 11000 parcels, in 1970, FedEx delivered 15000 and TNT delivered 12000, in 1980, FedEx delivered 15000 and TNT delivered 16000, in 1990, FedEx delivered 17000 and TNT delivered 19000, in 2000, FedEx delivered 20000 and TNT delivered 25000.

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The line graph shows the comparisons between the proportion of goods delivery of two important mail service, Federal Express and TNT from 1920 to 2000.

Overall, the service provided by TNT initially was very minimal compared to the delivery service offered by the FedEX and by the end of 2000 TNT underwent a dramatic change and to over took the FedEx mail company.

From 1920 to 1960 , TNT showed a gradual increase in mail service by 5000 to almost around 12000 and latter witnessed to a slight drop and slight rose in the years 1970 and 1980 respectively. From there the service rocketed to around 22500 in the year 1990 followed by a minimal increase of almost 25000 in the end of the year 2000.

On the other hand, FedEx were the leading company during the years of 1920 to 1940 and then suddenly dropped to around 12500 in the year 1950 followed by a minimal decline and latter rose to almost 18000 and was some how able to maintaine the level till 2000

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The report provides a good overview of the main features of the chart, but it misses some key details and makes some inaccuracies. The report could be improved by providing more specific data points and by avoiding generalizations.

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