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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at leaThe line graph shows visitor numbers to 5 attractions in the city of Parkvale from 1996 to 2016. st 150 words. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays visitors in thousands to Parkvale attractions between 1996-2016: State Zoo 1996-340, 2000-600, 2004-950, 2008-850, 2012-830, 2016-930; National Gallery 1996-380, 2000-500, 2004-400, 2008-430, 2012-400, 2016-420; Indigenous Art Centre 1996-220, 2000-250, 2004-350, 2008-300, 2012-250, 2016-420; Museum 1996-450, 2000-480, 2004-600, 2008-600, 2012-600, 2016-600; Aquarium 1996-430, 2000-560, 2004-390, 2008-320, 2012-450, 2016-300.

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The graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited in the city of Parkvale between 1996 to 2016. There are five stunning places State Zoo, National gallery, Indigenous Art centre, and Aquarium. The chart shows Aquarium is the most popular place in the first year ,and National gallery become the most largest number in the last year.

In 1996, Aquarium aims the highest visitor (approximately 500) and declined dramatically to nearly 200 in the next year ,by contrast National gallery which started from around 300 of tourists rose significantly to almost 1000 number of individuals in 2000.

Museums remaind the same rate from the first year until the last year. Moreover, State zoo aims 300 tourists initially ,but over taken by Indigenous Art centre that rose from zero to nearly 400 ,in 2004.

In 2016, National gallery become the largest number of individuals with the highest rate (roundly1000) ,followed by Museum, Indigenous Art centre, and state zoo respectively. The lowest number of the charts is Aquarium.

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number: 5

national: 4

gallery: 4

aquarium: 4

tourists: 3

state: 3

indigenous: 3

centre: 3

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. Key points are often inaccurate, and the description lacks a clear overview and logical structure. The writing also contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to group related information. Consider organizing the report by grouping attractions with similar trends or by discussing each attraction individually in a more structured way. Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to link ideas and sentences together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., "stunning places," "aims the highest visitor," "remained the same rate"). The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and quantities more accurately. For example, instead of "rose significantly," consider using "increased substantially" or "grew considerably." Use more precise language to describe the data, such as "peaked," "fluctuated," or "stabilized."

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. There are also issues with article usage and preposition choice. For example, "Aquarium is the most popular place in the first year" should be "Aquarium was the most popular place in the first year." "National gallery become the most largest number in the last year" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct grammar usage. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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