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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarker. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarker. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a map of Garlsdon with a population of 65,000, showing a countryside, town center (no traffic zone), housing, industry, railway, and main roads. The countryside surrounds the town, the town center is centrally located, housing areas are scattered around the town center, and two industry zones are indicated, one towards the northwest and another to the south. There are two proposed sites, S1 located north near the railway and S2 south closer to housing and main roads. Garlsdon is 12 km to Hindon, population 10,000; 16 km to Bransdon, population 15,000; and 25 km to Cransdon, population 29,000.

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The map shows two possible options for the new supermarket in the town which called the Garlsdon.

Overall by comparing the Supermarket number 2 and supermarket number 1, S2 is more convenient for population in the Garlsdon with 65,000 of individuals due to central arrangement which can leads to great economy and financial aids.

Supermarket number 2 is standing in Towa Central which is in the center of the map, furthermore with no traffic zone and surrounded by housing. Also among towa central we can see railway and three main roads. Moreover suitable industrial on the North and South sides from Towa.

By the way as for Supermarket number 1 he is located in countryside where railway passes, however far away from the housing and towa cental that finally will not sufficent for main urbanization.

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supermarket: 4

number: 4

which: 3

central: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by comparing the two proposed sites and identifying the main features, such as the town center, housing, railway, and roads. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the location of S2 is described as 'Towa Central' (likely a typo for 'town center'), and the report does not mention the surrounding towns (Hindon, Bransdon, Cransdon) or their distances, which are key features for comparing accessibility. The overall structure is clear, but the language is sometimes informal and imprecise (e.g., 'which called', 'he is located', 'sufficent'). To improve, ensure all main features are covered, use more formal and accurate vocabulary, and avoid minor spelling errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and a brief overview, but the organization is unclear and the progression of ideas is difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'By the way', 'furthermore', 'Moreover'), and the paragraphing is not effectively managed. To improve, create clear paragraphs for the overview and each site, and use a logical sequence to compare the two locations. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that transitions between ideas are smooth and purposeful.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'standing in Towa Central', 'sufficent for main urbanization'). There is an attempt to use some topic-specific terms (e.g., 'no traffic zone', 'railway', 'main roads'), but the range is narrow and lacks precision. To improve, expand your vocabulary to include more precise and varied terms for describing locations, comparisons, and functions (e.g., 'situated', 'adjacent to', 'accessible', 'residential areas', 'commercial viability'). Also, avoid informal or vague expressions and ensure that word choices are accurate and natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that significantly impede understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'which called'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'can leads'), missing articles, and unclear pronoun references (e.g., 'he is located'). The range of grammatical structures is very limited, and punctuation is often incorrect or missing. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct grammar, and gradually incorporate a wider range of structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice, conditionals). Review basic grammar rules, such as verb tense consistency, article usage, and subject-verb agreement, and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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