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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not. Write a a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts average annual GDP growth percentages for four classifications over four decades: in the 1960s, wealthy countries had 4.5%, globalisers 4.5%, non-globalisers 2.9%; in the 1970s, wealthy countries showed 3.0%, globalisers 3.5%, non-globalisers 3.2%; in the 1980s, wealthy countries marked 3.0%, globalisers 5.0%, non-globalisers 1.4%; in the 1990s, wealthy countries achieved 2.0%, globalisers 5.0%, non-globalisers 0.5%.

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The line graph provides information about the average increase in domestic products in wealthy, globalisers and non-globalisers countries from 1960 to 1990.

As a general idea of this report is that, wealthy countries descreased over the time period, while globalisers grew significantly throughout the period. However, non-globalisers illustrated flactuation.

With regard to the wealthy countries, at the first year it was at approximately 4,5%, then these countries declined to exactly 2% by between the 1960 and 1990. Likewise, the globalisers was at almost 1,3% in 1969, after which it showd notably growth to just over 3% and in the final year it reached a peak number at 5%.

In comparison, the non-globalisers, in the beginning it was at just over 2%. After that, it went up slightly from just over 2% to about 3% by 1970. However, by 1980 and 1990 it went down from almost 3% to just over 0%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

countries: 4

wealthy: 3

globalisers: 3

non-globalisers: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the trends for wealthy countries, globalisers, and non-globalisers over the given period. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., globalisers starting at 1.3% in 1969, non-globalisers at just over 2% in the 1960s) and some omissions (e.g., the 1970s data for non-globalisers is not clearly presented). The structure is logical, but the language contains errors and unclear phrasing (e.g., 'descreased', 'flactuation', 'showd notably growth'). To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data from the visual, using clearer comparisons, and proofreading for grammatical accuracy and word choice.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow of information is somewhat disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'As a general idea of this report is that'). The paragraphing could be improved to better separate the discussion of different country groups. To improve, focus on using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task but lacks range and sophistication. There are some errors in word choice and form (e.g., 'descreased', 'flactuation', 'globalisers countries'). The report would benefit from using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'experienced a decline', 'showed a steady increase', 'fluctuated'). Try to avoid repeating the same phrases and incorporate synonyms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity (e.g., 'wealthy countries descreased', 'the globalisers was at almost 1,3%', 'it showd notably growth'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. To improve, practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences, and pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and article usage. Proofreading for basic errors is also recommended.

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