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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of spending in Turkey, from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Percentage of spending in Turkey (1960-2000)" showing data for five categories across five years. Food percentages were: 1960, 35%; 1970, 32%; 1980, 26%; 1990, 20%; 2000, 15%. Leisure percentages were: 1960, 20%; 1970, 18%; 1980, 16%; 1990, 14%; 2000, 12%. Clothing percentages were: 1960, 9%; 1970, 12%; 1980, 15%; 1990, 16%; 2000, 17%. Transport percentages were: 1960, 10%; 1970, 9%; 1980, 8%; 1990, 7%; 2000, 3%. Energy percentages were: 1960, 5%; 1970, 4%; 1980, 3%; 1990, 2%; 2000, 1%.

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The line graph provied information about the proprtion of spending in Turkey, form 1960 to 2000

Overall, the percentage of spending included food, leisure, clothing, transport, energy

in 40 years, Turkey witnessd a lot of changes in this 40 years, for instance food decreased about 20 proprtion during the 40 years

From 1960 to 2000 there was decline for all of the categories of expenditrue, however there was an exception with clothing it did increase from about 9 and then in 1970 it went up to almost 11 and eventually raised to about 17 percent

In 1960, the highest proprtion was food with 35 percent however it reduced to 15 percent in 2000, moreover there was slight decreaes in leisure it went graduly from 5% to almost 2%, and in transport there wasn’t any huge decreases unitl year 1990 it was 7% and it went strongly near no 3 percent

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main trends in spending categories over time, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. Key data points are misreported (e.g., leisure is said to drop from 5% to 2%, but the actual figures are 20% to 12%), and some categories like energy are not mentioned. The overview is present but lacks clarity and completeness. To improve, focus on accurately selecting and reporting the main features, making clear comparisons, and ensuring all categories are covered. Also, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and some specific data, but the overall structure is unclear and the message is difficult to follow. The introduction is incomplete, and the paragraphs are not logically organised. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate, which disrupts the flow. To improve, plan a clear structure: an introduction paraphrasing the task, an overview of the main trends, and then a paragraph with specific details. Use linking words and phrases (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'over the period') to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'provied', 'proprtion', 'witnessd', 'decreaes', 'graduly', 'expenditrue'). There is limited range and flexibility, and the choice of words is often inappropriate or unclear (e.g., 'strongly near no 3 percent'). To improve, learn and use a wider range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'expenditure', 'proportion', 'decline', 'rise', 'fluctuate', 'gradual', 'sharp'). Practice spelling common words correctly and use synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incomplete sentences. Punctuation is often missing or misused, making the text hard to read. For example, 'in 40 years, Turkey witnessd a lot of changes in this 40 years' is repetitive and grammatically flawed. To improve, focus on writing complete sentences with correct verb forms (e.g., 'Turkey witnessed many changes over the 40-year period'). Practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, and ensure punctuation (full stops, commas) is used correctly.

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