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Band 7+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph with a y-axis from 0 to 25 and an x-axis from 1920 to 2000, showing data for the US and CHINA. For the US, approximate data points are: 1920 (11), 1925 (12.5), 1930 (11), 1935 (13), 1940 (12.5), 1945 (5.2), 1950 (15), 1955 (13.5), 1960 (12.5), 1965 (12.3), 1970 (10), 1975 (9), 1980 (8), 1985 (6.5), 1990 (6.5), 1995 (7.8), and 2000 (6.5). For CHINA, approximate data points are: 1920 (10), 1925 (11.5), 1930 (10), 1935 (15), 1940 (5), 1945 (5), 1950 (20.5), 1955 (9), 1960 (8), 1965 (6.5), 1970 (4), 1975 (3), 1980 (1.8), 1985 (1.8), 1990 (2.5), 1995 (2.7), and 2000 (1.8).

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The line graph shows changes in the birth rates of China and the USA from 1920 to 2000.

Overall, both countries experienced a general decrease in birth rates over the period. However, China showed much more ups and downs while the USA had a more stable pattern. By the end of the period birth rates in both countries were quite low, especially in China.

In 1920, the birth rate in the US was slightly higher than in China. During the 1920s and early 1930s both countries saw small increases. In the middle 1930s China reached a highest point of around 15 while the US also increased but at a lower level. After that, birth rates in both countries dropped sharply during the 1940s. A big difference shown around 1950. China’s birth rate increased significantly to about 20 which was the highest point on the graph. The US also rose at this time, but much less than China reaching around 15. After 1950, birth rates in both countries start to decrease again.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

birth: 7

rates: 5

china: 5

countries: 5

around: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, noting the overall decline and fluctuations in birth rates for both China and the USA. Key turning points and comparisons are mentioned. To improve, include more specific data points to support your statements and enhance the precision of your analysis. Also, extend the description to cover the entire period to 2000, ensuring a comprehensive overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and presents a clear overview of the data. The information is logically sequenced, and the main trends are identified. To improve coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, you could use more synonyms or paraphrasing to avoid repetition and enhance the flow of the text. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data to maintain a clear structure.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends in a graph. Terms like 'decrease,' 'increase,' 'stable,' and 'fluctuations' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and sophisticated vocabulary related to trends and comparisons. For instance, instead of 'small increases,' you could use 'marginal growth' or 'modest rise.' Also, consider using a wider range of adverbs and adjectives to describe the degree and nature of changes. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures. There are a few minor errors, such as subject-verb agreement issues ('a big difference shown') and awkward phrasing ('China reached a highest point'). To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for these types of errors. Additionally, try incorporating a wider range of sentence structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, to demonstrate greater grammatical flexibility.

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