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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph with a y-axis from 0 to 25 and an x-axis from 1920 to 2000, showing data for the US and CHINA. For the US, approximate data points are: 1920 (11), 1925 (12.5), 1930 (11), 1935 (13), 1940 (12.5), 1945 (5.2), 1950 (15), 1955 (13.5), 1960 (12.5), 1965 (12.3), 1970 (10), 1975 (9), 1980 (8), 1985 (6.5), 1990 (6.5), 1995 (7.8), and 2000 (6.5). For CHINA, approximate data points are: 1920 (10), 1925 (11.5), 1930 (10), 1935 (15), 1940 (5), 1945 (5), 1950 (20.5), 1955 (9), 1960 (8), 1965 (6.5), 1970 (4), 1975 (3), 1980 (1.8), 1985 (1.8), 1990 (2.5), 1995 (2.7), and 2000 (1.8).

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The graph illustrates the changes in birth rates of two countires China and USA between 1920 and 2000.

In the beginning of 1920, both China and USA had similar birth rate which is almost 10%. Gradually it started to increase in China by 5 more percent and in USA by 3% in 1935. China faced a major dicline in 1940 as only 5% mother gave birth to their children and this rate were the same for almost 4 years. On the other hand, USA’s birth rate started to decrease in 1945 which was 5%. Neverthless, both China and USA faced rapid growth of child birth by the end of 1945 with the rate of nearly 20%. Even though China’s birth rate seemed to get lower in 1955 and diclined to almost 8%, USA did not see any rapid change on the child birth rate. From 1970 till 2000, child birth started to get slow and stidy and in 2000 China’s birth rate fell down to only 3% and USA’s to only 7%.

These coparison explains the chagnes of birth rate among China and USA from 1920 to 2000.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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birth: 10

china: 6

almost: 3

started: 3

child: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. The organization is generally clear, but could benefit from a more structured approach, such as grouping periods with similar trends together. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and structuring the report into clear paragraphs that highlight overall trends and significant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview of the data but lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not always presented in a cohesive manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons effectively. Consider organizing the report into paragraphs that focus on specific time periods or trends to improve clarity. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences together.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices. There is a reliance on basic vocabulary, which restricts the ability to express the data and trends with precision. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, stabilize) and use more specific terms to describe the data (e.g., 'approximately 10%', 'a significant decline'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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