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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, wheals and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates species counts in Gomez Straits from 2006-2018. In 2006: Seals 40, Whales 20, Dolphins 30. In 2010: Seals 35, Whales 22, Dolphins 28. In 2014: Seals 40, Whales 23, Dolphins 27, and in 2018: Seals 47, Whales 20, Dolphins 48.

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The bar grapth illustates overall count of dolphins, whales and seals reported in the gomez starits between 2006 and 2018

overall,as per the data, dolphins population are increased dramatically over the year.However,seals count showed fluctuation over the period.on the other hand, there was no majour change in whales count over the years.

As per the data, seals population was 43 in 2006 .however,after 4 years the reported count was 25 .on top of that,this number increased to almost 35 in 2014.now according to final report in 2018,seals population was approxemately 45.Futhermore, the count of the whales population showed minor changes over the years.23 whales recorded in 2006 and after 12 years the count of whales increased to 25 in 2018.Moreover,2006,18 dolphins acounted in 2006 at gomez starits.after that ,dolphins population showed dramatic. 22 dolphins acounted in 2010.this trend continue over the 8 years and in 2018 the dolphins reported highest count among all of the diffrent spicies at 52

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

count: 7

dolphins: 6

whales: 5

population: 5

reported: 3

increased: 3

showed: 3

years: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., seals 43 instead of 40, whales 23 instead of 20, dolphins 18 instead of 30, and final counts are off). These inaccuracies detract from the task achievement. Additionally, the report lacks a clear overview and has some organizational issues. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and provide a clearer summary of the main features with appropriate comparisons. Also, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical progression. The introduction is brief and does not provide an overview of the main trends. The body paragraphs are not well-structured, and the information is presented in a somewhat random order. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect, making the text difficult to follow. To improve, create a clear structure with an introduction, an overview paragraph, and body paragraphs that group related information. Use a range of linking words and phrases appropriately to connect ideas and ensure smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with some inaccuracies (e.g., 'grapth', 'illustates', 'starits', 'majour', 'acounted', 'diffrent', 'spicies'). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language, but it is not always appropriate or precise. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary to include more precise and varied terms related to data description (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'remained stable', 'showed a significant increase'). Ensure correct spelling and word choice to enhance clarity and accuracy. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly affect readability. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, articles, and sentence structure. For example, 'dolphins population are increased' should be 'the dolphin population increased'. Additionally, many sentences are incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is often missing or incorrect. To improve, focus on writing clear, grammatically correct sentences. Use a variety of sentence structures, including complex and compound sentences, and ensure correct punctuation throughout. Practice with grammar exercises to strengthen your accuracy.

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