Bar Chart

Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, wheals and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, wheals and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates species counts in Gomez Straits from 2006-2018. In 2006: Seals 40, Whales 20, Dolphins 30. In 2010: Seals 35, Whales 22, Dolphins 28. In 2014: Seals 40, Whales 23, Dolphins 27, and in 2018: Seals 47, Whales 20, Dolphins 48.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits between 2006 and 2018.

Overall, dolphins increased significantly at the end of the year, and it was the highest percentage compared with seals and whales, but at the beginning of the year dolphins demonstrated the smallest rate.

At the beginning of the period, seals went up significantly about 43%, while whales and dolphins were around 20%. In 2010, seals decreased sharply at 25% compared with whales, it was higher than seals approximately 47 percentage. Also, dolphins rose steadily just under 20%.

In 2014, dolphins climbed dramatically roughly 33%, whilst whales decreased around 20%, but seals was nearly one third. In contrast, dolphins reached a peak just over 50% in 2018, and seals considerably increased about 45%. The smallest percentage was whales approximately 38% at the end of the period.

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seals: 7

dolphins: 7

whales: 6

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some trends but contains inaccuracies in the data reported. The structure is present but the information is not always clear. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring that comparisons are precise and supported by the visual information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is disrupted by inaccuracies and a lack of clear connections between sentences. The overall structure is present, but the details need improvement to enhance coherence. For example, the transitions between different years and species could be smoother. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to describing trends and proportions, such as 'significantly,' 'sharply,' 'steadily,' and 'dramatically.' However, there are instances where the word choice is not entirely accurate or appropriate for the context. For example, using 'percentage' when referring to absolute numbers. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary and ensuring that the terms used accurately reflect the data presented.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors and inaccuracies affect the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. Common issues include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement problems, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'seals went up significantly about 43%' is not grammatically sound. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and sentence structures, and proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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