Bar Chart

Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, wheals and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, wheals and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image illustrates species counts in Gomez Straits from 2006-2018. In 2006: Seals 40, Whales 20, Dolphins 30. In 2010: Seals 35, Whales 22, Dolphins 28. In 2014: Seals 40, Whales 23, Dolphins 27, and in 2018: Seals 47, Whales 20, Dolphins 48.

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The bar chart illustrates numbers of seals, whales and dolphins generated in the Gormez inn straits 2006 to 2018. It is measured in percentages.

Overall, dolphins are getting increase for these years while whiles are nearly staying in the percentages. In contrast, the percentage of seals dropped and grow dramatically.

At the beginning of the period, in 2006, Seals are most highest accounted in the Gormez Straits which is through more than 40. However, it is go down to standing between 20 to 30 in 2010.

On the another hand, over the following four years, dolphins are rising non stoppable from almost 20 to over 50. In about whales, the levels are nearly same as same in over these years with small number of percentages. At 2010, whales accounted the most highest approx upper 20.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

seals: 3

whales: 3

dolphins: 3

years: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The writing also suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and proofreading for grammatical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, and the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, such as grouping information by species or time period, and using transition words to connect ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary and frequent inaccuracies in word choice. There are instances of inappropriate or imprecise language, such as "whiles" instead of "whales", "grow dramatically" and "non stoppable". The report would be improved by using a wider range of vocabulary and ensuring accuracy in word choice. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. These errors significantly impede understanding. For example, "Seals are most highest accounted" and "dolphins are rising non stoppable" are grammatically incorrect. The report requires extensive revision to improve grammatical accuracy.

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