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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a hospital now and future plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains two diagrams for 'NEW STREET HOSPITAL' labeled 'NOW' and 'FUTURE PLANS'. The 'NOW' plan includes a 'Car Park' in the southwest, an 'Accident and Emergency' building south of the central 'Main Hospital Building', and 'Offices' in the northeast, with a road entering from the north and forking. The 'FUTURE PLANS' diagram shows a 'Car Park' in the southwest, a 'Café' south of the central 'Main Hospital Building', and a 'Fitness Centre' in the northeast, with a road network that loops around the site. Both diagrams feature a compass rose.

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Hospital’s developing plans are described by two pictures below at now and in future. Overall, it’s going to be changed significantly including some places are going to be removed, or replaced, as well as enlarged.

Firstly, main hospital building is still going to be remained with same position in both moment. Besides, offices is going to be replaced with fitness centre and the old one as unchanged place as the rebuilted thing in the future. Additionally, the street is going to be made mostly longer and more complicated than it before.

Secondly, accident and emergency is a special place which is going to be disappeared. Furthermore, a future car park is going to be enlarged nearly two times compared to an old one, and a new café is also going to built nearby at the same time.

In conclusion, two maps below describe the process of modernizing the hospital from the present to the future, which is going to be renovate dramatically. Generally, the construction of a new café, fitness centre, and developing the street, as well as the car park.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying several key changes, such as the replacement of the offices and the addition of a café. However, the response is somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear, cohesive structure. There are several inaccuracies in how the information is presented (for example, stating the main building is 'rebuilted' or that the street is 'longer' rather than describing the new loop structure). To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary for spatial changes (e.g., 'expanded', 'relocated', 'constructed') and ensure that the overview and conclusion do not simply repeat the same points. Avoid using phrases like 'two pictures below' as the report should be a standalone summary of the data provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by awkward phrasing. While you use cohesive devices like 'Firstly', 'Secondly', and 'In conclusion', they are used somewhat mechanically. The final sentence is a fragment (it lacks a main verb), which disrupts the logical flow. To improve, focus on using more natural transitions and ensuring that every sentence is a complete thought that contributes to the overall summary.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used incorrectly, which can lead to confusion. For example, phrases like 'rebuilted thing' and 'both moment' are not natural English. There is also some repetition of basic structures. To improve, try to use more precise academic vocabulary related to change and development, such as 'remodelled', 'expanded', 'transformed', or 'relocated', and avoid informal terms like 'thing'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the report, particularly with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'offices is'), verb tense, and passive voice construction (e.g., 'is going to be remained', 'is going to be disappeared'). These errors occasionally make it difficult to follow your meaning. I recommend reviewing the rules for passive voice and ensuring that singular/plural subjects match their verbs. Aim for a variety of complex sentence structures while maintaining accuracy.

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