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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a bar chart of travel spending in 2014 by the top ten countries: China (120 billion USD), United States (85 billion USD), Germany (80 billion USD), United Kingdom (54 billion USD), Singapore (39 billion USD), South Korea (25 billion USD), Hong Kong (24 billion USD), India (19 billion USD), Malaysia (14 billion USD), and Taiwan (12 billion USD).

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The chart illustrate the top ten countries ( China, United States, Germany, United Kingdom, Singapore, South Korea, Hong, Kong, India, Malaysia and Taiwan. In the highest spending on traveling during the year 2014.

China had spent drastically amount of US dollers in 2014, then United state and germany spent the equial amount of money following with united kingdom where they made to be more reasonable. Afterwards singapore and the rest of the countries spent lower than 25 Billon USD on traveling in 2014.

If we group by two categories. We can see that China, United states, Germany and United kingdom spent the most during 2014 of more than 45 to approx 110Billon USD. However, the rest of the countries made sure to not put their income for traveling.

Therefore, it is more reasonable for the countries to spend less for the economie.

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united: 6

countries: 4

spent: 4

germany: 3

kingdom: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by identifying the top spending countries and making some comparisons, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. Key data points are misreported (e.g., China's spending is not specified accurately, and the grouping of countries is vague). The report also includes an irrelevant concluding comment about economic reasonableness, which is not part of the task. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features, such as the highest and lowest values, and make clear comparisons between countries. Avoid personal opinions or conclusions not supported by the data. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The opening sentence is incomplete and contains a list of countries that is not integrated smoothly. The second paragraph introduces comparisons but lacks clear logical progression. The final paragraph introduces a grouping idea but is not developed coherently. To improve, use clear topic sentences, link ideas with cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly'), and ensure each paragraph has a single clear focus. Also, avoid informal or vague expressions like 'made sure to not put their income for traveling'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with several inaccuracies and informal choices (e.g., 'drastically amount', 'equial', 'Billon', 'economie'). There is some attempt to use comparative language, but it is not precise or varied. To improve, use a wider range of academic and precise vocabulary (e.g., 'expenditure', 'approximately', 'significantly higher', 'moderate spending'). Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms (e.g., 'billion', 'economy').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('chart illustrate'), incorrect verb forms ('had spent'), missing articles, and punctuation issues. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive, with some fragments and run-ons. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and improve overall accuracy.

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