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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two maps of a village from 1995 and the present; in 1995: the map includes a fishing port in front of the sea, a fish market, three shops, a cafe, and housing towards the bottom; farmland, a forest park, and a hotel in the north-northeast; a road crossing vertically from top to bottom divides these features; the present map shows removal of fishing port, fish market, forest park, and farmland; replaces shops with a restaurant, adds apartments north of the road between housing and two new tennis courts, hotels remains, introduces a golf area to the north-northeast, inserts a parking area adjacent northeast to the hotel, and the road remains constant.

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The two maps demonstrate how the village of Ryemouth transformed following the addition of new facilities between 1995 and the present.

Overall, the village was an underdeveloped area with limited facilities. After redevelopment, it has become a more modern and visitor-friendly area. The most noticeable changes include the construction of sport areas , touristic services

The island underwent significant urbanization with the introduction of new infrastructure. One of the major changes was the construction of new residential areas and restaurants in place of the fish market on both sides of the road. Other physical developments included the relocation and construction of houses on the northern side of the island. Finally, as the last crucial modification, golf and tennis areas were added on the eastern side of the island.

Overall, the island focused most of its areas on farming. After the transformation of the new island, some details were removed, while what was increased includes the forest park. It was an extremely important zone for reducing air pollution. The second largest change involves removing the shipping port, which blocked the main route.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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areas: 4

island: 4

construction: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. It incorrectly refers to the village as an 'island' and mentions the removal of the forest park, which is not supported by the visual description. The report also omits key changes such as the removal of the fishing port, fish market, and farmland, and the addition of apartments, tennis courts, and a golf course. The structure is somewhat disorganized, with an unnecessary repetition of 'Overall' and a lack of clear comparisons. To improve, focus on accurately describing the main changes, use appropriate geographical terms (e.g., 'village' instead of 'island'), and ensure all key features are covered with relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction and an overall statement, but the organization of ideas is somewhat confusing. The second paragraph discusses changes in residential and recreational areas, while the third paragraph returns to an overall summary and introduces new information about the forest park and shipping port, which disrupts the logical flow. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some transitions are abrupt. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and that ideas progress logically from one to the next. Use a range of linking words and phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, with some good choices such as 'transformed', 'underdeveloped', 'visitor-friendly', and 'urbanization'. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'touristic services' (which is not natural English) and 'the construction of sport areas' (should be 'sports areas'). The phrase 'as the last crucial modification' is slightly unnatural. To improve, aim for more precise and natural vocabulary, and avoid direct translations. Use a wider variety of terms to describe changes (e.g., 'demolished', 'replaced', 'converted') and ensure collocations are correct.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and some passive constructions. There are minor punctuation issues, such as a missing period after 'touristic services' and a missing space after 'areas ,'. The sentence 'After the transformation of the new island, some details were removed, while what was increased includes the forest park.' is grammatically awkward and could be rephrased for clarity. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors and awkward structures that prevent it from being fully controlled. To improve, proofread for punctuation and sentence structure, and aim for more concise and clear expressions.

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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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