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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The charts below describe 4 sectors of employment, in 2009 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image displays employment distribution in four sectors within Town A for years 2009 and 2020 via two circular charts; in 2009, Manufacturing accounts for 60%, Hospitality 11%, Engineering 9%, Teaching 20%; by 2020, Manufacturing remains at 60%, Hospitality adjusts to 17%, Engineering 8%, Teaching 15%.

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The graph illustrates the materials of items that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Overall, people who live in this city started to recycle glass containers and some kind of paper in the first years. Then alimininum cans followed them after four years. Moreover, they recycled plastics first time in 1990.

The percentage of glasses and papers which are recylcled were 65% and 50% respectively in 1982. On the one hand the rate of recycling paper and cardboard increased moderately for four years. On the other hand glass containerses recycling decreased steadily in the same time. In addition they starts save aliminium cans in 1986. But the pertencage is so less than other materials. The percentage of aliminium reprocess around 5%. The reuses of plastic starts in 1990. The percentage of recycling papers, glass containers, aliminium cars and plastics rose up to 80%, 50%, 15% and 5% respectively in four years. The percentage of recovering paper and cardboard starts fell significantly to 70% by the years, whereas the percentage of recycling glass containers jumps considerably to 60%. The chance of aliminium canses reprocess grew rapidly to nearly 45% in 16 years. The percentage of recycle of plastics flactuated slightly to approximately 8%.

In conclusion, people saved so much material in few decates.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 6

percentage: 6

glass: 4

recycling: 4

aliminium: 4

containers: 3

paper: 3

plastics: 3

starts: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the graph but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The organization is present but lacks clarity, and the language contains errors that impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction and conclusion are basic. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, hindering the flow of the report. For example, the shift from the overall trend to specific details in the second paragraph could be smoother. Try to use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice ('alimininum', 'containerses', 'pertenage', 'reprocess', 'cars', 'flactuated', 'decates'). There is also some repetition of words and phrases, such as 'percentage of recycling'. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and changes, and pay attention to using the correct form of words. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a greater command of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('starts save', 'reuses of plastic starts'), subject-verb agreement issues ('glasses and papers which are recylcled were'), and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is also sometimes awkward or unclear. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures with greater accuracy. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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