Band 5: You stayed in a rental apartment during your trip last year and were generally satisfied with it. However, you encountered one issue. You are planning another trip and would like to rent the same apartment again. Write a letter to the owner. In your letter Express your interest in renting the apartment again. Mention the problem you faced during your last stay. Provide details about your upcoming trip and ask about the availability of the apartment. (User-Written IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample)

Dear Sir,

I send in your apartament Aurora wonderful weekend. There was really amazing view on Atlantic Ocean and I must come back to this place.

I am writing to you this letter because I do not be happy in 100%.

When we spend our first night in your beautiful flat we saw a lot mosquitos. This was long and horrible night, we spent our first night with killing insects. When we waked up we saw next awful think we had not warm water, and we did not have warm shower. In my opinion warming water is something what is normal in luxury apartments like this. I was really disappointed. After my frozen shower I saw incredible view in the window. It was something what was breathtaking.

We will come back to your apartment because this view and sunny weather is something what my soul really need in winter in my country. I must come back to your apartment. Are you available from 10 March to 18 March 2025? Please could you do something with mosquitos and frozen water? Warm shower is something what I really need in my life after long walking. I will come with my family.

See you soon

Xyz

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