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Band 5+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Mr. Usarov,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant spirits and good health. I am writing to you to inform about joining a new fitness club, which belongs to you. I would love you gather some necessary information before I enroll.

First and foremost, I need girls’ club, which is separated from boys’ membership. I would also prefer pay for only a day because I attend some tutorial courses every day. So I may miss your fitness training some time. The only thing I want is to be in female membership. Additionally, I would like to give money in a ridiculously cheap way for per fitness training.

Let me know to join a new fitness club whether I need to apply for you.

I would greatly appreciate your consideration and kindly response to me soon, and You are able to send the resolution to my phone number below:5327427.

Thank you for taking the time to review my request. I look forward to recieving a prompt reply.

Yours sincerely,

Ziyodova Dilshoda

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