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Band 5+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Sir,

My name is John and i live in Jale Building. I had recently come across some flyers promoting your fitness gym and I would like to enquire some details about it.

I work everyday till 5pm and I would like to be in the gym in the evening, so kindly share the timings of the gym. I would also like to have a personal trainer so please check if there are any trainers available in the evening. Are there any special packages involved for groups or partners because i have a friend eho would like to enroll as well. If not, Please send the details of the monthly fees. Are there any dietary restrictions or any guidelines related to mt diet that i would have to follow.

I hope to recieve your response as soon as possible and please send the deatils to me at the earliest.

Yours sincerely,

John

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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there: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by covering the key questions. However, it could be improved by more directly and clearly requesting information on membership types and joining procedures.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between ideas. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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