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Band 6+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear Gym Manager,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing this to express my desire towards joining your new gym. Moving ahead, I am interested in knowing about different gymnasium membership are available currently and their respective prices. Additionally, we are a group of three people, so I am interested in any kind of offers and discounts on Gymnasium membership and food supplements.

Other than that, I would like to know about the available activities at your gym. Moreover, please let me know the timings of different batches. Furthermore, I would really appreciate if you explain the joining procedure of your gymnasium. Lastly, I am requesting you to send your gym brochure with the response letter for in-detail information.

I am eagerly awaiting a positive response from your esteemed side. Maintaining an open line of communication will undoubtedly enhance the synergy between our endeavours.

Regards,

Mittal Thakkar

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