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Band 6+: You want to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell him/her about your business explain why you think it is a good idea and ask him/her for some help or advice

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Dear Guru,

Hi! How are you? It’s been so long since we last met. I put pen to paper to ask for a piece advice from you.

Actually, I’m going to start my own business. As you know, I’ve been working as a lab technician since 2019. So I’ve decided to open my own medical laboratory, isn’t a great idea!

I think it is a good idea not only because it is a lucrative field but it also provides me a golden opportunity to serve underprivileged patients.

I, however, need your opinion on whether I should collaborate with “Lal Path Labs” or “SRL” lab. I couldn’t decide by my own because both are well-known brands of medical industry. Please clear my this dilemma by opting one.

I trust you; therefore, your decision would be final. Thanking you in advance! Write soon my friend.

Yours lovingly,

Nimrat.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear and detailed explanation of the business idea and seeking advice. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that could be improved.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using words and phrases appropriately and effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter shows a good grasp of grammar, there are some errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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