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Band 5+: You were recently disrespected by one of the employees at your local supermarket. Write a letter to the supermarket manager. In your letter - tell him/her why you were speaking with the employee - describe the employee's rude behavior - explain what you'd like the manager to do

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Dear sir or madam

I would like to bring your attention that I feel very upset at your Supermarket by your one of employees his name is John. This incident was happened yesterday evening when I was shopping. I asked from him about some of products because I was so confused just because all the aisle has been changed in your store. At first, he stared into my eyes without saying anything and walked away. After that, I called him again and he responded very rudely that “I am the cashier ask around someone else”. I really feel embarrassed because other customers were also there.

I think communication skill is very crucial in every job sector. So, my request is that you have to talk about this matter with John because this kind of things can put the negative impact on the business reputation. I would really appreciate your attention to this matter and look forward to your prompt response

your sincerely

Adit Mahi

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