Letter

Band 4+: You were supposed to pick up a colleague from the airport last week, but you completely forgot due to a scheduling conflict. Write a letter to your colleague, apologizing for missing them at the airport. You should include details about: - What caused you to forget - How you realized your mistake - What you did to remedy the situation after your mistake

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by this letter i would like to tell you about our meeting, my apologize i forgot and missed the meeting beffore. i dont meant to skiped the meeting, i got many schedule at that time and that is my fault i cant manage my schedule properly

at that day i had to attend 5 meeting in a day from morning until evening because of that i forgot about our meeting i dont mean that our meeting is not important albeit im literlary forgot remembering im exhausted attend 5 meeting in a day im very sorry i promise i dont do it again in the future

in the next weeks i have no schedule from monday until saturday how abaout we conduct our meeting in monday as i know you have no schudule at that day we will start the meeting at 8 am unti 10 am i promise i will not forget about this meeting again and i have no schedule at that time and there is no reason i skip the meeting

Word Count: 173

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

meeting: 11

schedule: 4

about: 3

forgot: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by apologizing and providing some details about why the meeting was missed and a suggestion for rescheduling. However, the letter includes some irrelevant information and lacks detail in key areas, such as the intended purpose of the meeting. The language used is also quite basic and repetitive. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the meeting's purpose and using more varied and sophisticated language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the intended message. Paragraphing is absent, and the flow of ideas is disjointed. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure a logical progression of ideas. Connectives and transition words are needed to link sentences and paragraphs smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, lacking the range needed to express ideas effectively. There are instances of incorrect word usage. To enhance lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider variety of vocabulary relevant to the context. Focus on learning and correctly using more sophisticated words and phrases.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper sentence structure. These errors impede understanding. To improve grammatical accuracy, concentrate on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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