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Band 4+: You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

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Dear Manager

I work on the Angel Company and I am writing to let you know that I would like to know more about in training course. It would like to know more about the training which will be held in your company. It will be useful for my job specialy upgrading my skill.

Let me to explain more details this training course. The training course will begin in Monday until Friday on July and then we have special uniform when we do this training.

Currently, I have taken some information from my friend that training course had been giving us benefit, especially for my skill job in your company. As such, I believe it will be help your company on future, therefor, I am fascinating to join this training course.

I would appreciate it if you could help me to join it. And I believe it will develop your company and I grateful if you could provide.

Thank you for your consideration

Rinaldi

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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training: 6

company: 5

course: 4

would: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task, but there are some issues with clarity and coherence. The writer could improve by providing more specific details about the course and its benefits, and by organizing the ideas more logically.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks cohesion and coherence. The writer jumps between ideas and sentences are not well-connected. The writer could improve by using transitional phrases and sentences to link ideas together.

Lexical Resource

The writer's vocabulary is limited and there are some errors in word choice. The writer could improve by using more precise and nuanced vocabulary to express their ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect use of verb tenses. The writer could improve by proofreading their work more carefully and using grammar and punctuation correctly.

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