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Band 4+: You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

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Dear Mr or Mrs,

My name is Naufal, I am working in EGG Corporation. The reason for my writing is to find more information about training course in social media that you have posted. Would you be kind to inform me in details? And I believe this course can be helpful for me.

About your posted, please explain the details of the course if I got quota. This is will be motivate me in my work. How lucky am I if can join in this course, because it is useful for my future. And the company can provide discounts or course package to reduce payments to their employees.

Finally, Thank you for your time and considering my request.

I am looking forward to you reply and I would appreciate it if you could inform me as soon as possible.

Yours truly,

Naufal

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task, but some details are missing. The writer could have provided more information about the course and how it would be useful for their work. Additionally, the writer could have been more specific about how the company could help them do the course. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is mostly coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The writer jumps abruptly from asking about the course to talking about the company providing discounts. The writer could have used more cohesive devices to link their ideas together.

Lexical Resource

3.5

The writer's vocabulary is limited, and there are some errors in word choice (e.g. 'posted' instead of 'posted online'). The writer could have used more precise and nuanced vocabulary to express their ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect use of prepositions. The writer could have used a wider range of sentence structures and more accurate grammar to express their ideas.

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