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Band 6+: You work for an entertainment company which plans to open a new theatre soon. You want to invite a famous actor to open the new theatre. Write a letter to this famous actor. In your letter • give some information about the new theatre • invite her/him to open the new theatre • explain why she/he would be a good person to open the theatre

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Dear Tony Stark,

I am working at an entertainment company that is planning to open a new theater in the upcoming days.

This will be the largest theater in the world, with a capacity of 300 people. The location of this theater is in the center of Toronto.

I would like to extend an invitation to you for the opening of this

theater. I am really excited because it will be a surprise for people that you are coming.

Tony, you are my favorite actor in the Marvel movies. Beyond that, you have inspired many through your motivational films, which is a major reason why you have won two Oscars. I hope to become an actor like you one day.

Yours faithfully,

Jagdeep

Word Count: 123

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

theater: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including providing information about the theatre, inviting the actor, and explaining why they would be a good fit. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details about the theatre (e.g., the types of performances it will host, its unique features) and elaborating on the reasons why the actor is a suitable choice (e.g., their connection to the local community, their support for the arts). Some of the language is a little informal for a formal invitation. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the invitation. However, the transition between the description of the theater and the invitation could be smoother. Consider adding a sentence that directly links the theater's opening to the invitation to enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and conveys the message effectively. However, there's room to enhance the lexical resource by incorporating more varied and sophisticated language. For example, instead of saying 'the largest theater in the world,' you could use a more descriptive phrase like 'a state-of-the-art theater with unparalleled capacity.' Similarly, consider using synonyms for words like 'excited' and 'motivational' to add depth to your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. The sentence structures are varied and generally accurate. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage to further refine your writing. For example, 'I am working at an entertainment company' could be improved to 'I work for an entertainment company' for a more natural tone.

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