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Band 4+: you work for an international company. You have been seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. write a letter to your manager .in your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I have seen an advertisement for an english course which will be useful for my job.I am writing this letter to you because I do not know to speak this language fluently.

To begin with,an english language is very crucial in all around the world.It is also known as international language,that is why it is very useful in everywhere.However,I am having a problem in speaking this language fluently.

On the other hand, nowadays the training courses are very expensive than my expectation.It would be grateful if you provide 30%of discount in each month.Moreover, my hectic schedule is running because of my job,and I request you to manage an online classes, it would be great convenience for me.Otherwise,I might be in a trouble.

Finally,I work for an international company,where every week foreigners come to attend a meeting here, therefore I have to give my presentation in english language.If it goes well than there might be a chance of promotion for my job.So , do not wants to miss this opportunity.

Thank you in advance and for your kind help.

Yours Faithfully,

Ranjita Bishwash,

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

english: 3

language: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5

The letter addresses the task by describing the training course, explaining how the company could help, and stating how the course will be useful for the job. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to the training course and the company's assistance.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. The ideas could be better structured for clearer communication.

Lexical Resource

4

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are repetitive, and there are errors in word choice and collocations. Try to vary your vocabulary more and use expressions more accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including verb tense inconsistencies, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation errors. Work on improving your grammar accuracy for a higher score.

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