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Band 4+: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head Office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in working for six months in the Ford Company head office. This company’s head office is located in the USA.

I am Working As a Car technician last 2 year. Ford Company is providing an internship for a company are provide Internship for company Technician. Ford International company around 2 years before going for head office to lane new skills and also lane car technology in this six-month time peered to lane. In these months, I also provided ped taring to lane new to add your technician skills to grow in a long time. Last but not list, Head office area 400 time more beater gene India office.

In this country people are more helpfully for India people and also lane some new skill in this country people. This country’s time is most important.

After my six-month internship, I will come back to my home country. I state my job as a car technician. Before my salary is 20,000 per months After complete six months internship my salary is 30,000 per month.

Your Sincerely,

Yash Patel

Word Count: 187

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 5

months: 4

office: 4

technician: 4

internship: 4

country: 3

people: 3

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Task Response

5

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. The reasons for wanting to work in the head office are not well-explained, and the plan for work while away is unclear.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The letter is difficult to follow due to numerous grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The ideas are not logically connected, and the flow is disrupted.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. There are some errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect tenses, articles, and prepositions. The sentence structure is often awkward and unclear.

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