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Band 5+: You would like to borrow camera from a friend.write a letter to your friend Ask your friend if you can borrow the camera Explain why you want to borrow the camera Say when you want it and when you will return

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Dear my friend is Ogabek

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you about the camera that I want to borrow it from you.

Well, my close friend is Ogabek. You have to give me your camera. This is because, I was to have a meeting with my colleagues. Therefore, I was to ask from you I am Shohjahon Eshmurodov who is one of your close friends.

First of all, I would like to highlight that why I want to borrow from you. As, your camera is extremely bigger than other camera and then, your camera take photos too clearly and bright for the meetings and other things.

Please, my close friend is Ogabek . I want take it after three days. Thus, the day was to have meetings and I would return it after four days.

Thank you for your time, conservation and understanding. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information.

Best regards,

Shohjahon.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

camera: 5

friend: 3

close: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the overall clarity and organization could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the organization and flow could be significantly improved. The numerous grammatical errors impact coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but more precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter's quality. There is some repetition and awkward phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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