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Band 5+: You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear Sir,

with due respect, I am writing this letter to get some information about the electronical gadgets, I would like to buy from your store.

At the onset, let me brief you regarding the products that will be buy by me. Specifically, I need a laptop on 22 Januray by 8 pm, it would be appricateable, if it is of dell Company. Along with that, I need a pair of head Set, USB cable, and a DVD player so that I can able to do office work.

Furthermore, considering I need the things on side as well as. I would need your green signal about having other things in your store because I am starting to do work from home, It is important for me to not disturbance family members. In addition to that, I need other things to make my office device connect to my lapton that I received from company to do meetings online, and present my as well as my collegue work to my clients.

Lastly, I would like to kown if you are able to provide me all the things listed, as I be needing them as soon as possible or can you order them for me? I will be very thankful for you. Moreover, it would be really helping if you can give me estimate pricing for the things with that you can let me known time is going to get the things available.

Kindly prompt my request to this matter

Yours Sincerely,

10-01-2025

Tim Brown

Word Count: 252

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
things: 6
would: 5
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in some areas. More specific details regarding the desired products would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's organization and flow could be significantly improved. Paragraphing and sentence structure need work to enhance clarity and readability. The numerous grammatical errors disrupt the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

5.5
The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks sophistication and precision in places. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and understanding. Improved grammatical accuracy is essential to achieve a higher score.

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