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Band 9: You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire about some electrical appliances that I am interested in purchasing from your store. I have heard from friends that your shop offers a wide selection of goods, and I hope you can assist me with my needs.

Specifically, I am looking for an OLED TV, a laptop, and a laptop mouse. Could you please let me know if these items are currently available in your inventory? If any of them are out of stock, I would appreciate it if you could inform me whether you can place an order for these products on my behalf.

Additionally, I would like to know if your store has a website for online purchases. Since I live quite a distance from your location, I would prefer to utilize a delivery service for my order. It would be helpful if you could provide me with information regarding the prices of the items and the delivery service, as well as the estimated delivery timeframe.

Lastly, should there be any delay in my ability to collect the items, I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me how long you would be able to hold the products for me.

Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Jack Harper

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Overall Band Score

9
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 6
could: 4
items: 3
delivery: 3
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Task Response

9
The letter fully addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear and concise information.

Coherence & Cohesion

9
The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs are logically structured and flow smoothly.

Lexical Resource

8.5
A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately, demonstrating a sophisticated command of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9
The letter is grammatically accurate and uses a variety of sentence structures effectively.

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