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Band 6+: Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think the insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you because I got a letter about the surcharging of insurance for my car.

I decided to write a letter to you because I got approval from you to buy a new car last year.

As you helped me at that time after considering my financial situation, So I think that you can help me with this as well.

As we discussed at the contract time that every payment will be of same amount as the first one and I agreed on that and at this time, I am unemployed so I am not willing to pay an extra cost for my car insurance.

Because of my employment status and our written agreement on car insurance if you can suggest me a possible solution to alleviate this situation will be very helpful for me and my family.

Yours faithfully,

Taranpreet Kaur.

Word Count: 149

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

letter: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but could be more persuasive in explaining why the increase is unwarranted and what specific solution is desired. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with clearer transitions and paragraphing. Some points feel a bit disjointed.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated language could strengthen the argument.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter is generally understandable, grammatical errors and awkward phrasing detract from the overall clarity and impact. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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