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Band 9: Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter ⚫ say why you want to go on the trip describe what you could do to help during the trip ask for more details about the trip.

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Dear Mr. Wilson,

I am writing to you to express my interest in joining the trip for children to a nature reserve, as you are looking for parents to travel with the group.

As a travel enthusiast, I love traveling, and this is considered a wonderful opportunity that helps me to travel along with my child and the group. As I mentioned, I am familiar with most of the nature reserves in and around the city, and I am good at organizing a tour. I would like to be part of the team in executing different things such as helping the team in guiding, supervising the children, documenting the travel in the form of photographs and videos, and finally, I can plan an interactive entertainment programme for the group, which I am good at.

It will be a pleasure if you can provide information about the trip, such as where the destination will be, how far it will be from our location, on which date it will be, and what you are expecting from a parent.

I hope the details that I provided are sufficient, and please let me know if you require any further information.

Yours sincerely

Rubin

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Overall Band Score

9

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

9

The letter fully addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear and convincing reason for wanting to join the trip, outlining helpful contributions, and requesting specific details.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter flows smoothly and logically, with clear paragraphing and transitions that enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

9

A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately, demonstrating a sophisticated command of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter is grammatically flawless, showcasing a wide range of structures and accurate punctuation.

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