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Band 5+: Your Company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager.

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Dear Mr. William,

I am writing this letter to express my happiness regarding the new introduced uniform.

It has been decades of wearing the same uniform that is also of old fashion. By introducing new dress code, the company gives the reason of happiness and excitement to the employees. I love the style of the dress as it follows the fashion of nowadays.

Although the style is trendy yet I am concerning about the colour of the uniform. It is noen green color of shirt that is too irritating for eyes, as well as it not looks like a professional office dress because of this color.

Since people prefer to wear light shades of clothes in the summer season, I request you to please change the color of the shirts, that can be the best color according to the office environment and will also maintain the professional look of employees.

I am hoping for the positive response and thank you for your time and consideration in advance.

Yours Sincerely,

Liza

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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color: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by expressing both positive and negative opinions about the new uniform. It clearly states the writer's preference for a different color.

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5.5

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences lack clarity and flow. The use of paragraphs could be improved for better readability.

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The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely accurate or appropriate. The writer could benefit from using more precise and sophisticated language.

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The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. The writer needs to pay more attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure.

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