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Band 5+: Your friend has agreed to take care of your home while you're away on a business trip. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter thank him/her for agreeing to help describe what you need him/her to do explain how he/she can contact you while you're away

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Dear Haider,

I heared from my family, that you are agree to take the responsibilities of my family, while i will be on international trip.

Firstly, i am here to thank you, that you will take care of my family on my international tour to USA. Specially my whole family is saying to thank you for this.

Basically, in my abscense you have to take care of the grocceries. Apart from this, everything is fill in the house. There is a car also in my house, so you have to use the car also, because the car is old if you not use the car from a very long, then it become difficult to start the engine .

When i will be on trip, so my Pakistani number will not working in forigen country. I have instagram, facebook, and whatsapp . You can contact on these app any time for the updates.

In last, hopefully you will manage these all very easily.

Best wishes.

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task, but contains some irrelevant information and inaccuracies. The purpose of the letter is clear, but the content could be more focused and organized. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing are present throughout the letter, which detract from the overall clarity. To improve, focus on using more accurate grammar and vocabulary, and ensure that all information included is directly relevant to the task.

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The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your thoughts and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, you could start a new paragraph when discussing how to contact you.

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The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('heared,' 'abscense,' 'forigen'). Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. For example, instead of 'take the responsibilities,' you could say 'take care of' or 'look after.'

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There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including incorrect verb tenses ('you are agree'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. For example, 'I heard from my family that you have agreed to take care of my family while I am on an international trip' is more accurate.

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