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Band 5+: Your friend recently recommended a language learning app that they found very helpful. You are planning a trip overseas and need to improve your language skills. Write a letter to the app developer asking for more information. - Explain your situation and language learning goals. - Ask specific questions about the app's features and suitability for your needs. - Inquire about any available discounts or trial periods.

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To,

Director khatri

Hi, my name is Saru Rai and I am planning a trip to China for some business projects. I am from Nepal so I find difficult to learn a chinese language. I told this problem to my friend and she suggested me Duolingo app which improve language skills.

After I knew about this app, I was so happy. I am very eager to learn and want to become fluent in chinese language. I have few questions regarding this app. How can I sign up in this app? Do I need any membership to activate plans? Is there any specific chinese classes? Is there any games related to languages? How many days do I need to learn a basic chinese language? I am seeing this app first time so I am curious about it’s feature as well. In this Duolingo app, can we interact with Chinese people?

I hope this letter get you in time. I am very eager to know all the details about this app.

From,

Saru Rai

Word Count: 172

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

chinese: 5

learn: 3

language: 3

about: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the situation, asking questions about the app, and inquiring about discounts or trials. However, the organization could be improved for better clarity. Consider grouping related questions together and using more formal language in certain sections to enhance the overall impact. Also, remember to specifically ask about discounts or trial periods, as this is one of the requirements of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping your questions into a separate paragraph to enhance clarity. Also, ensure a smoother flow between sentences by using appropriate transition words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for conveying the message, but it could be more varied and precise. Try to use synonyms and more specific words to express your ideas. For example, instead of 'happy,' you could use 'delighted' or 'pleased.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('a,' 'an,' 'the'). Also, review sentence structure to avoid awkward phrasing. For example, 'I find difficult to learn a Chinese language' could be improved to 'I find it difficult to learn Chinese.'

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