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Band 4+: Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In yout letter - explain why you woud like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you woud be available for this work

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I have advertised for your hospital unpaid helping worker. I like to do somthings for community when I can do. So my free time at 7 am to 11 am that I work in your hospital I have some experince like fristaid training, Dressing, peaper work little bit of cordex management. But I thingk fristaid training is better for me because I have long time experince in this training. If I get this volentor job I am happy do your hospital. Social work is give a pice our soul.

Hospital give a chance one time work preform thankful to your hospital.

That for I am wating for your response. I am ready to work for tomorrow.

Your sinsiyer

Ingwa Subba

Thank you

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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training: 3

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The letter adequately addresses the task, but could be more detailed and organized. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks clarity and flow due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

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The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more varied and precise.

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The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that hinder comprehension.

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