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Band 4+: Your local hospital has advertisedfor people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital,You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hospital.In your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital. - say what type of unpaid work you would able to do. - give details when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir or Madam

Hi, my name is Felicia, I am writting to inform you that I interest to be volunteer in this job. I saw the advertisement you needed a volunteer as soon as so I decided to be a volunteer. The reason I’m interesting this job because I want to help more people that I can and my passion to take care another people that need my help and I want have more experience. Beside that I have another experience do the volunteer job in the camp but I have not yet do the volunteer job in this hospital so that’s the reason I’m interesting this job as a volunteer so I believe that I’m perfect candidate for the job, considaring my skill and my experience. I hope you will consider my offer, and I hope to work with you soon.

Warm Regards

Felicia

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

volunteer: 6

experience: 3

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Task Response

The letter generally addresses the requirements of the task, but the inclusion of irrelevant or inaccurate material detracts from the task achievement. The letter explains why the writer wants to do unpaid work, but it doesn't specify the type of work they can do or their availability. To improve, provide specific details about the type of unpaid work you are able to do and when you would be available.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, and the flow of ideas is difficult to follow. Paragraphing is absent, making it a single block of text. To improve coherence, organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the task. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'therefore') to link sentences and paragraphs logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of varied or sophisticated language. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary related to volunteering and hospital work. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'volunteer,' consider using 'aid,' 'assist,' or 'support.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your basic grammar skills. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to catch and correct errors.

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