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Band 4+: Your neighbor is selling their car, and you are interested in buying it. Write a letter to your neighbor expressing your interest. You should include details about: - why you need a car - what you like about your neighbor's car - when you are available to discuss the purchase.

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hello,

i see that you are selling a car and i want to buy it. i need it because now i studying to have a driver license and after that i’ll can ride a car. also i am a student and i need to ride every day to university at the bus, for me it difficult, so when i buy a car it don’t will be a problem.

i see that you very love you car and when it has a trouble you always wond to find a decision for it, it very cool, so i think that a car have a good condition. also i love car in a black color so it will be a good plus.

so if you ready to discuss for selling, i always free from 5 to 11 pm and you can write me or go to my house

your neighbor

Word Count: 147

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the main points of the task, but the development of each point could be stronger. The reasons for needing a car are mentioned, but not elaborated upon in detail. The appreciation for the neighbor's car is present, but could be more specific. The availability for discussion is clear. To improve, focus on providing more detailed explanations and specific examples to support your points. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to enhance clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to guide the reader through your letter. For example, you could start a new paragraph when you transition from explaining why you need a car to discussing what you like about your neighbor's car. Also, the introduction and conclusion are very abrupt. Try to start with a more formal greeting and end with a clear closing statement.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely and engagingly. For instance, instead of saying 'you very love you car,' you could say 'you clearly take great care of your car.' Also, avoid informal language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. For example, 'i studying to have a driver license' should be 'I am studying to get a driver's license,' and 'it don't will be a problem' should be 'it won't be a problem.' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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