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Band 5+: Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologize Describe what action you will take

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Dear Johnson ,

I’m writing to express my apology for the noise from my house.I wasn’t aware that while installing new window and doors in hosue by carpenter is generating high noise and reached outside to other houses.

Actually , in last three days , after I returned from work I used to call the carpenter and his helpers to install new windows ,doors and closet in kids room.They used a drill to dig holes on the wall to install curtain, I know it’s little bit noisy but I only have time and chance to these homework after my duty as last weekend was not enough to complete this work.

However, I will try to avoid any work in house during weekdays, I will plan to call the labours in weekend and I’ll request them to complete all pending work during weekend between morning to afternoon time to avoid doing such kind of disturbance to my neighbours. Moreover , I assure you this will not happen again and please accept my apology.

Best wishes ,

Abdullah

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

weekend: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reasons for the noise, offering an apology, and describing the actions to be taken. The explanation is clear, and the apology is sincere. The described actions are reasonable and demonstrate consideration for the neighbors. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the timing of the work to be done and perhaps offering a direct way for the neighbors to contact you if the noise becomes problematic again.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is adequate, but consider breaking up longer paragraphs for better readability. For example, the second paragraph could be split into two to separate the explanation of the noise source from the justification for the timing. Using more explicit cohesive devices (e.g., 'Therefore,' 'In addition') would also enhance the letter's coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of 'generating high noise,' you could use 'creating a significant disturbance.' Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition (e.g., 'work' could be replaced with 'renovations' or 'improvements' in certain contexts). Also, ensure that the word choices are appropriate for a formal letter to neighbors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Some examples include incorrect verb tenses ('I used to call' should be 'I called'), incorrect article usage ('in hosue' should be 'in the house'), and awkward phrasing ('these homework' should be 'this work'). Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. Proofreading carefully before submitting the letter would help catch these errors. Also, try to vary sentence structure to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical skills.

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