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Band 5+: You've started a new hobby that you're really excited about and want to share your experience with a close friend. Write a letter to your friend describing: - what the hobby is and why you chose it - what you've learned so far and any challenges you've faced - how this hobby is affecting your life and whether you can do it together soon.

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Dear Lily

How are you ? What are you doing ? If you remember i tell you little about my new hobby last week? So i started it.It is a sewing ,and also cooking. Esspecially i chose it because i am very interested it ,and also my mom helps me to chose.So i learned a lot of things about sewing and also cooking i had a lots of challenges to learn it .The first thing i sewed it was carpet for my sister i worked very currenty on it,and also have a more chellenges to sew it.However the second hobby was cooking but i didn’nt tell you about it . So cooking is a next hobby which helped my mom because she was a professional chief .It was also lots of douts ,so when i wanted to cook something i cant do it i broke down every dishes ,but after my mom supported and belive me so she helped me to cook .But now i am a professional in my work i can everything my relatives want .

Best regards

Your faithfully jasmin

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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cooking: 4

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hobby: 3

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The letter adequately addresses the task by covering all the points. However, the response could be more structured and detailed.

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4.5

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