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Band 5+: Yusupov Mirzoulug'bek Task 1 Letter: You are a member of school environmental club. Write a letter to the head of school how to make it an eco-friendly area. - explain why it is important to take care of the environment; - give your suggestions such as recycling, energy saving or green spaces; - say this will improve the school.

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Dear Sir,

As a member of the school’s environmental club, I am writing to suggest some ideas about how we can create more eco-friendly areas in our school.

Taking care of the environment is crucial us , as a community, because it helps avoid some pollution and save natural resources for our generations.

Firstly, We could put recycling bin in classroom and around school for throwing paper, glass and plastic. Saving energy is another concept by turning off lights and computers when we do not use them. Our team plant more trees and build green spaces that is they offer numerous advantages for students including physical and mental well-being as well as learn nature.

Finally, these experience would not only have immediate environmental benefits but also foster a greater sense of responsibility among students. Also, these positive changes would improve the school’s reputation as a forward- thinking institution.

I hope you will consider those suggestions .

Yours faithfully,

Sherzod

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, providing suggestions for making the school more eco-friendly. However, the letter could be more detailed in explaining the benefits of each suggestion.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between ideas. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the overall cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choices. The vocabulary could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors in grammar and punctuation. These errors affect the clarity and fluency of the letter.

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