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Band 8+: 3) Serious violent crimes among people who are under 18 are becoming more common. Some people think that children who commit serious crimes should be treated like like adults,while others would say they should be rehabilitated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Serious violent crimes committed by people under the age of 18 are becoming increasingly common. While some people argue that young offenders who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults, others believe that they should be rehabilitated. This essay will discuss both views before explaining why rehabilitation is the better approach.

On the one hand, those who support treating juvenile offenders as adults believe that strict punishment can deter future crimes. They argue that violent teenagers may reoffend if they are treated too leniently. From this perspective, harsh penalties help young criminals understand the seriousness of their actions and protect society from further harm. In addition, supporters claim that individuals who commit serious crimes at a young age are more likely to repeat such behaviour later in life, so stronger punishment is necessary.

On the other hand, many people argue that offenders under 18 should be rehabilitated rather than punished as adults. I strongly agree with this view because children are still developing mentally and emotionally. With proper psychological support and education, young offenders are more likely to change their behaviour and reintegrate into society. Moreover, rehabilitation addresses the root causes of crime, such as family problems, lack of guidance, and poor education. For example, some countries have introduced moral and psychological education programs in schools, which have helped reduce youth crime by teaching teenagers respect, empathy, and self-control.

In conclusion, although treating young criminals as adults may discourage crime in the short term, rehabilitation is a more effective long-term solution. By focusing on education and psychological support, governments can help young offenders become responsible members of society and reduce violent crime overall.

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