Given the endless desire of humans to succeed, the question of what it takes to succeed remains prominent. While it is a common assumption that hard work and determination are pivotal in achieving success, others maintain that many other underlying factors exist. This essay will analyse these conflicting views.
Advocates for the importance of hard work and determination emphasize the positive traits these qualities foster. They argue that diligence reflects a well-balanced and moral character. Relentless pursuit of one’s dreams not only nurtures patience and tolerance but also develops prudence in one’s work and behavior. This proves that industriousness lays the foundation for other factors that lead to success. Additionally, hard work and determination help us overcome obstacles. That is, if one is determined, all challenges become catalysts for further improvement rather than hurdles that prompt giving up. We need not look further than the case of J.K.Rowling who faced multiple rejections before the publication who faced multiple rejections before the publication of Harry Potter, highlighting determination in overcoming setbacks.
On the flip side, opponents maintain that we cannot solely rely on industriousness and determination. Luck and timing are also important factors. Tim Berners-Lee invented the World Wide Web at a time when the technology could support it, showing how timing can play a crucial role in success. Networking and connections are another factor influencing achievement. It is evident in the film or politics industries where senior promotion is highly valued. For example, Lily-Rose Depp, born into a high-profile family with an Oscar-winning father Johnny Depp, had her path to early success paved compared to her peers.
In conclusion, there are still different views on what contributes most to success. However, it is undeniable that industriousness and determination play a significant role in achieving success.