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Band 9: Many people believe that Art is a subject which is not necessary and should be removed from the school. The belief is that the money should be spent on creating more I.T. courses and buying computers. To what extent do you agree?

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In contemporary society, there is a noticeable shift away from the appreciation of the arts, with technology increasingly taking center stage. While some individuals argue that art is an unnecessary subject within the educational framework, advocating instead for the allocation of resources towards the enhancement of information technology courses and the procurement of computers, I contend that art remains an indispensable aspect of education, crucial for the holistic development of children.

The evolving landscape of education has paved the way for the introduction of new subjects in response to the demands of modern society. Historically, art has been of paramount importance, particularly to the elite. However, in the current era, there is a prevailing sentiment that acquiring computer skills holds greater value than engaging in artistic pursuits. This perspective undermines the unique benefits that art provides to young individuals. For instance, it offers a creative outlet for children who may struggle to articulate their emotions or express their viewpoints verbally. A compelling case can be made through the example of my brother, who has encountered challenges with oral communication, often feeling too timid to speak in public settings. Nevertheless, he possesses exceptional talent in painting, effectively conveying his thoughts and feelings through his visual art.

Moreover, involvement in artistic activities can significantly benefit children facing specific challenges, such as the increasing prevalence of screen addiction among young individuals. The impact of excessive screen time on mental well-being and vision is a growing concern. Reports indicate that a considerable number of youths are now grappling with diminished eyesight. In this context, the capacity for imagination in young children is robust, and engaging in art can profoundly enhance this creativity. Creating art not only stimulates imaginative thinking but also fosters critical thinking skills, as children learn to analyze and interpret their own work and that of others.

In conclusion, while it is essential to adapt to our rapidly changing technological landscape, this should not come at the expense of neglecting the humanistic expression of art. The study of art is vital, as it nurtures hidden talents and contributes significantly to emotional intelligence. Therefore, I firmly believe that art should retain its place in the educational curriculum, as it is instrumental in shaping well-rounded individuals who can effectively navigate both creative and technological realms.

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