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Band 5+: More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals, and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that psychological assistance is what is required.

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The increasing number of prisoners requires constructing a lot more jails for lawbreakers, therefore, it is believed that harsh penalties could reduce the crime rate, while others argue that mental support is a better solution. From my perspective, obtaining professional assistance from psychologists makes criminals comprehend their faults and to commit any crimes in the future.

To embark on, living in prison for a long time will not solve the problem of climbing average of world’s crime incidents because in most cases individuals can not correct their illegal behaviour by themselves. Furthermore, long-term imprisonment causes a myriad of mental disorders and, for this reason, revenge is the largest desire which will be an essential part of lawbreakers’ lives and is expected to lead to greater crimes. In other words, anger and revenge, caused by locking up for years, result in breaking more laws, thus, adults will not have a chance to decent life with impressive goals and achievements. Moreover, their surroundings will despise that and not communicate that might lead to social isolation.

On the other hand, comprehension of criminal’s mistakes via medical assistance makes people be law abiding citizen which will not have any emotional burden. Additionally, taking actions against violence, which is the key motive of most of the crimes, is an approach to demonstrate criminals that there should be a different approach that may solve a row. To clarify, in childhood youth has seen only one way to survive, however, therapist indicates problems solved and ended smoothly. For example, fighting with peers previously, adolescents will continue to do it in the future, whereas psychologist advises to have a face-to-face interaction where all misunderstandings will be discussed.

In conclusion, punishments for the extended scale result in mental disorders and lower chance to live a successful life. Nonetheless, I assume that starting to treat prisoners is the best solution because criminals will be responsible for their actions.

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