Band 5+: Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

This nowadays many countries using children for some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. I find myself agreeing with those who think that it’s better to for children to try new things and have a lot of experiences since young age.

Many working people get little to no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. This might be happen to children who have responsibility for work. Meanwhile the other friends have a lot of free time to play and spend time with their families, some children who works a lot only focusing for working hours and maybe distract their homework for the school. Working long hours causes a great deal of stress too and can be very bad for one’s health. The government must find a way to reduce this like set a term for what minimum years old for children who can apply to work.

However, in my view, there are wide range of benefits that will come if children joining work. They gain more experiences and how to handle the problematic situation since kids. Also they will work more efficiently when graduated like bring new ideas to companies and become a respected source of knowledge among adults.

Therefore, i side with those who believe that it is good for children to enganged in some kind of paid work.