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Band 5+: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative.Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

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It is widely argued that youngsters should spend their spare time with families, while others believe that kids should spend more time with neighbors and participating outside such as communitiy services. In my opinion, I believe that participating outside can be a positive way to develop their skills and build good relationships.

On the one hand, spending time with familiy can be a positive ways for children to foster their cognitive development due to the fact that parents can take care their children and teach them with emotional support which is crucial to improve their mental health. In additon, childern can follow the parents’ behavior and teaching ways and it can be beneficial to teach them to be a good community. For example, when parents often speak well without detrimental words, most children will likelyhood follow their speaking without bad words rather than youngsters who live in worst families guidance. As a result, youngsters will have good manners while participating in public or school areas.

On the other hand, I believe spending time outdoor can be positive ways for children to build new skills and gain new experience such as participating in community services or playing with their neighbors. In addition, children can meet new friends to train the cooperation and achieve good relationships in friends circle. These is crucial for kids to develop their public awareness and academic performance. For instance, when youngsters contribute to an enviromental community, youngsters will likelyhood improve their enviromental awareness and gain valuable skills such as leadership, communication and cooperation skills which are crucial for their future careers.

In conclusion, although familiy guidance is crucial to build children’s mental health and cognitive development, I believe that contributing outside is more crucial to improve kids’ skills and worth experience.

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