Some individuals think that success in adulthood is connected to the way their parents raised them. To a certain extent, I agree that , success in adulthood is crucial factor ,however, l think there are more important factors for being succesful.
On the one hand, I believe that success in adulthood is more dependent on other things. Firstly, key to success in adulthood are hard work and patience. By working hard and being patient, people can overcome every problem they face even though it will be challenging. For example, if someone who does not know anything about computers wants to learn how to code and work as a programmer first of all , they have to work hard to learn the basics, and eventually this will take time if a person is not patient enough, they will not achieve this goal. Secondly, for being successful it is crucial that person has to know how to improve themselves by learning from their mistakes. For instance, if developer made a mistake while developing an app, they will automatically not do it next time, and by that developer learned from his mistakes.
On the one hand , l believe that the way their parents raise them is also important factor for being successful. To begin , the way parents teach their children how to be more successful from their experience is very valuable information because children can prevent mistakes that were made by their parents. For example , if parents who are in car business and teach their children about how to start a business and not to work without contract with costumer they will apply these advices and become more successful.
In conclusion , While l admit that success in adulthood can be affected the way people are raised, l do not believe it is most important one.