Many people think that schools have to teach children subjects which only they will need in their future career and jobs, and other subjects such as music and sport are not essential. I completely disagree with this point.
Firstly, sport and music play a crucial role in children’s growing healthy and more creative because sport and music are really beneficial for children and many students. For example, sport helps to grow children healthy and prevent from obesity or something like that. In addition, training with sport can provide people from getting ill and it boosts children’s immune system . While children starts to move, their body becomes stronger.
Secondly, music is also play important role in children’s life because it helps to improve their mood. For example, if the educational system will remove the musical activities, children will get bored and it also can affect their studies such as they might not be active in their lessons. In fact, they become disengaged and less interested affact their academic performance in other subjects as well.
In conclusion, I believe that music and sports are essential parts of the school curriculm. They not only support children’s well being but also contribute to their future success in life and work.
