🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 5+: Some people say that outdoor activities benefit children's development rather than computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

There is an opinion that outdoor activities bring more benefits for a child’s development than playing computer games. Personally I partly agree with this suggestion based on some reasons that are explained in this essay.

On the one hand, there are two main reasons why some people believe that outdoor activities are beneficial to children. First, they promote a sustainable healthy lifestyle, as these games require regular activities which aim to keep discipline in daily life. This interaction improves academic performances, which strengthens their competition in the job market.Furthermore, outdoor activities strengthen bonds with their friends, thanks to these games often require collaboration and turn-taking with peers. This interaction helps build trust and fosters a sense of community among players, thereby strengthening their ability to form and maintain positive relationships, unforgettable senses with their friends.

On the other hand, playing computer games has several detrimental effects on a child’s growth. Firstly, spending time on computer games poses risks such as eye problems and musculoskeletal problems have been seen as culprits in hindering children’s well-being and posture, if they need too much exposure to blue light and lack of exercise. This impact caused difficulty in daily activities and reduced productivity at educational achievements, which missed crucial boats by this disadvantage in the future. Secondly, playing computer games lead to brain rot and violent, depraved thoughts, since most computer games are addictive and require overconsumption of worthless information, and children usually ignore age recommendations for gaming. This interaction makes children antisocial and disconnected from the world, thereby crimes committed that endanger social security

In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that outdoor activities have more advantage for children’s development than playing computer games.

Word Count: 286

Essays On The Same Topic:

Some people say that outdoor activities benefit children’s development rather than computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A school of thought holds that children’s maturation is formed by the benefits of outdoor activities rather than computer games. While acknowledging the reasons for this proposal, I would argue that it would not be true in some other cases. On the one hand, it is justifiable for someone to advocate that children should participate […]

Some people say that outdoor activities benefit children’s development rather than computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often proposed that outdoor activities contribute more to the overall development of children compared to computer games. I also hold this view. First, outdoor pursuits significantly improve children’s physical health. For instance, in Finland, schools incorporate regular physical activities such as hiking and sports, which has resulted in some of the lowest obesity […]

Some people say that outdoor activities benefit children’s development rather than computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often proposed that recreational activities contribute more to overall development of children compared to that of computer. I also hold this view. First, it is important to recognize that outdoor pursuits improve children physical health and development. Being outdoor is similar to being exposed to a variety of natural elements, which strengthen their […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some people argue that the use of drones for commercial deliveries will lead to job losses and privacy issues. Others see it as a more efficient and environmentally friendly method of transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The advent of autonomous aerial vehicles for commercial deliveries has sparked considerable debate regarding their societal impact. While proponents champion this innovation as a catalyst for logistical efficiency and urban decongestion, opponents raise legitimate alarms over the erosion of privacy and potential threats to public safety. Although I acknowledge the operational merits of drone deliveries, […]

People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature such as novels and poems. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that teaching literature in high school is a sheer waste of time since there is little to no practical values. However, I contend that it provides essential moral orientation to students. On the one hand, high schoolers might find it hard to apply literature lessons in reality. Indeed, writers or poets compose […]

Some people think that working from home has more advantages than disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

The question of the advantages and disadvantages associated with working from home has become an increasingly important issue in modern society. What many people fail to recognise, however, is that it involves not only potential benefits but also considerable challenges. So significant are the benefits associated with remote working that its value should not be […]

Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries school attendance is mandatory for children up to specific age. I agree with this notion that all should remain in school until the age of eighteen. In the following paragraph, I would discuss in detail. To begin with, the most important reason for having school age 18 years because it is most […]

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not.

There has been a debate about whether the increase in electronic books users is more engaging than those using conventional books. Despite these existing dispute, I believe there’s reason behind every choices. In this essay, I will explain the benefits and drawbacks of this trend. Firstly, I would say that accessibility and comptability of paperless […]

Some people think mobile phones are most useful for their professional lives, others think mobile phones are most useful in their personal life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals believe that cell phones are mainly used in professional workplaces to communicate with the team. Others argue that these are increasingly utilised in personal life for keeping them up to date with the current trends. I believe that mobile phone are mostly used in perosnal lives because the benefits related to current trends […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.