Band 5+: Some people think that globalization is a force for good, promoting cultural exchange and economic development, while others believe it erodes national identity and widens economic inequality. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, it cannot be denied that many people argue that globalization has emphasised for cross-border trade, cultural exchange and economic growth, while others think that it could eliminate national identity and lead to economic disparity. I believe globalization phenomenon could increase national financial through international trading, and speed up cultural exchange globally.

These days, some people say that globalization might cause crisis identity in many countries. This is because this phenomenon would make foreign culture easier to acces many people in the world. When people use social media, such as facebook and instagram, they are exposed many kinds of cultures that they could follow as a cutting-edge trend. Therefore, they would begin to leave their culture and use western culture massively in the society. Additionally, others also believe that globalization could cause economic inequality in the community. The reason of this is that in the country, global plutocracy would go up in the globalization era, causing the richest has a big authority in the government, therefore the society are not longer having the equal right to enrich theirselves.

In my opinion, globalization could encourage economic growth and support to cultural exchange in many countries. This is because this phenomenon would allow people to expand their trade massively in around the world. If many countries may sale their products to other countries, they could gain more profit and enhance their national financial. It also might be said that international trading need to interact with people in world, therefore they could learn about other cultures, such as language, tradition, and traditional food. Consequently, it could accelerate cultural exchange among countries in the world and enhance their knowledge about other countries.

To sum up, although others think that globalization could lead to crisis of national identity and economic disparity in society, I am of view that globalization could improve economic in many countries through export and import process and support cultural exchange among countries in the world.